2003-04-15 - I Wander The Sky Like A Full Moon
Layout 75/100: It looks good. It's perfectly centered on my screen which looks great. It's different shades of blue which gives it quite a cold feeling. I guess this is the look they were going for when they made it because there is a picture of a girl standing in snow. It has a nice wintery, calm feel to it. The picture is placed perfectly on the page, the links are nicely placed underneath and the entry space is very clear and distinuishable. I have seen this layout once before. You need to change the older entries text to the text on every other page. You can do that by going to the edit your HTML section and choosing the third option to change each indvidual entry. It'll make it look better than the standard font that is there now. All the links work on your navigation and you have our link up =) However you don't have a previous/next button and that's annoying because it means I have to go back through your archives every time I want to read a new entry.
Content 85/100: You are brilliant at expressing yourself through your writing. This entry was brilliant and so descriptive. Your entries aren't too long that they get boring, but they aren't too short that you feel you have barely learnt anything. You don't list out the contents of your day. You find one thing that has had some sort of impact on you, be it happy/sad etc and you concentrate on that. You don't have all that many entries, as you havn't had your diary long so I was able to read them all. I thoroughly enjoyed it. You tend not to use any capital letters, at all! I guess this is ok though, as it is an on going thing and you don't switch from capitalising to not. Apart from that, your spelling and grammar are fine.
Insight 82/100: It's insightful in the way that you are able to understand the way you think after reading it, rather than insightful in the way that it describes your whole life story. You seem a very deep thinker this entry is a good example of that. I think the layout suits your personality very well. You seem like you would like to live at peacefull life, at one with nature. The layout is very peacefull and calm looking. The girl on the picture is outside, alone enjoying walking through the snow. You seem to me the type of person to appreciate things like this.
Errors 100/100: No errors at all.
Annoyances 70/100: The fact there is no previous/next buttons and the large text on your archives page.
Extras 40/100: A few extras.
Total 452/600 - 75.3%
Would I come back? I might do.
Reviewed by Bonnie
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