2003-05-14 - I'm dying inside...all alone...
Layout 76/100: I like everything above the tagboard. The tagboard looks completely out of place. At least change the colours to fit in with the theme of your diary, if you absolutely insist on having it there. I like the shape of the picture. I can tell you made it yourself though because it's not of the best quality. The girl and the razor are very badly cut around. I think you could have made it better by adding more stuff and blending things et cetera. Just to make it look more professional. The bits of black that are behind the navigation at the top are kind of annoying. Makes it hard to read. The navigation is well organised. The names you have chosen for the links are very confusing though. All of the links work and ours is there. You have no previous or next buttons, please add some, diaries without them are so annoying. Your guestbook doesn't match AT ALL and the imood text colour also doesn't match. Credit to bandchick182 for this design.
Content 48/100: You basically just write about your day and that usually consists of what happened at school. It got boring very quickly. You write for the audience and I don't like that. This is your diary and you should write for yourself and nobody else. You only have a few entries and the majority of them were just quizzes you had taken. You didn't reveal much about yourself. You often talked about being depressed and wanting to kill yourself but never said why. Try and write with a bit more feeling. You tend to only update your diary when you are bored and like I always say, a boring writer will write boring entries. Your spelling and grammer was pretty awful.
Insight 33/100: Not much at all. You hinted on things sometimes but never enough for me to be certain of anything. The layout suits you I think. You seem depressed and the picture is very depressing.
Errors 85/100: The text on your archives page is set to the default Diaryland one and you had spelling errors throughout. The text is messed up on your "falling in a never ending hole" entry.
Annoyances 73/100: The link names, the lack of previous/next buttons, that tagboard and your spelling.
Extras 60/100: Some.
Total 375/600 - 62.5%
Would I come back? Nah.
Reviewed by Bonnie
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